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I'm pretty insane,
Or so I've been told.
But I really don't care,
I'll be this way when I'm old.

I don't need a counsellor,
I'm perfectly fine.
I'll be okay soon,
It'll just take time.

I don't need the shock treatment,
I'm alright in the head.
I don't care what you think,
Or what your friend said.

Don't start to gossip,
There isn't much use.
All you'll accomplish,
Is leading me to the noose.

So, yeah, I'm depressed,
And, yeah, I'm insane.
But there's no need to tell me,
There's nothing you'll gain.
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Author's Comments

Written last year when a friend told me, as a joke, that I needed the shock treatment. She meant nothing by it, but I was actually rather offended.

My house used to be an asylum, you see, so I have to deal with mentally ill (in case they're watching me write this) ghosties, and so I have a fair idea of what it's like.

But anyway, I hope you like it, it was on my Bebo for ages, but then I chose a different one in the end.

LIES:

*Lines 2-4, Stanza 2. I am NOT perfectly fine, and I will NOT be okay soon.

*Line 2, stanza 3. I am not alright in the head, I'm well aware of that, hence the poem.


It's basically about how I'm insane and how I know it, and like it that way, and no matter what you say, I don't give a flying banana what anyone thinks of me or my sanity.


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100 Themes Challenge # 12 - Insanity

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:iconbittersweetlulaby13:
lol I really liked this one!!! Reminds me of me! Exactly the same!
:iconcursedarchangels:
lmao sweet. Yay for insane people!

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Cause I can’t hold on when I’m stretched so thin, I make the right moves but I’m lost within. I put on my daily façade and then, I just end up getting hurt again by myself!
:iconkanarflop:
omg!!! this iz lyk me 2!!!! but, i already c councelor...

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Lauren: Come to our teamspace! We have! Uh...
Me: What DO you have Luarn?
Lauren: WE HAVE BANANAS!!
Everyone: ... :liquisoft:
~Kittengoggle: You DO know the double meaning for that, right Luarn?
Lauren: Wut? :P Nooooo.... I DON'T KNOW!!
:iconcursedarchangels:
I won't because that's not gonna help me. My insanity is half the reason people like me. When I was sane, nobody liked me, I was boring and insecure. Now, I'm interesting (ish), hyper, happy, fun, funny, you see where I'm going with this?

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'This is my Vietnam,
I'm at war.
Life keeps on droppin' bombs,
And I keep score.
' P!NK - 'My Vietnam'
:iconsasorifangirl222:
insanity is a strange thing...
kumiko-but it's also very interesting!
kumi what have i told you about talking while i am!
kumiko-I am you idiot!
...shutup...

^ ^; hehe, split personality....sry...

Great poem!

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:iconcursedarchangels:
haha internal conversations made external.

Insanity is fucking awesome. I was sane for the first thriteen years of my life. It fucking sucked. I was a total try-hard loser, and now I'm insane as anything and I'm having a great time!



Thanks for the fave, and comment! Nobody's commented Insanity Pledge in ages...check out my latest stuff, won't you? Proves my insanity.

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:music:Give in, give in,
..._...l..________________, ,
....../ '---_______----______l]
...../_==o_______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__)/
....// (..) ) ,----"
...//____/
..//____/
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decide.:music:
:iconsasorifangirl222:
i used to try hard to not talk to myself of at least keep it from others, it it just made me feel like a freak. I stopped doing that and i found i have plenty of friends and i feel much better ^ ^

Np and o course i will!

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:iconcursedarchangels:
I talk to myself anyway. Just myself lol, there's no-one in there to make the conversations more interesting XD.


My friends don't mind, they do it themselves lol.

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:music:Give in, give in,
..._...l..________________, ,
....../ '---_______----______l]
...../_==o_______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__)/
....// (..) ) ,----"
...//____/
..//____/
.//____/
decide.:music:
:iconsasorifangirl222:
lol it can actually be very interesting to have someone to talk to when no one else is around...exxcept around these last few days....
kumi's still pissed about the last few chapters i posted....

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